We’ve had a chance to review the latest proposal you posted on your blog. The ideas in all three proposals are undoubtedly creative and interesting, so thank you for the effort and thought you’ve put into them. However, we noticed that the main focus of our brief — designing an advertising campaign to promote a workshop — hasn’t been fully addressed in these proposals.

In particular, we feel that Rano’s design proposal could serve as a great starting point if you could incorporate the requested adjustments to align it more closely with the brief. Let us know if you’d like to move forward with refining this idea together!

With love,
Team 25